I know your summer is absolutely ruined since I have yet to finish revisions on even the first book of 'Serpent and the Unicorn,' but I'm working on it! It is almost as much work, and far less fun, than writing a novel story, no wonder I never went into editing! But don't worry, I'm not changing the story, merely the word structure to make it a bit less obvious and cumbersome, but it will take awhile, so go photograph a comet or something!